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Another Sov failure! :P

Discussion in 'Awesome Media' started by Sovereign002, Feb 28, 2010.

  1. Sovereign002

    Sovereign002 Rest in Peace - 28th Feb 2010

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    Another Sov failure! :P

    Well, I've posted a few random poems in here in the past. This one isn't any better, I'm afraid. It's fairly unfinised, so feel free to tear it apart. :p


    Hello, my shiny little star.
    How do you do,
    Watching my every war?

    Still as brand new,
    As the first day I saw you.
    You're still as rare,
    Still one of those very few.

    ~~~

    I lay here, bare.
    Open to your gentle gaze,
    Out in the cold night's air.

    Counting down the days,
    Waiting for your grace,
    My mind stuck in a maze.

    I have to give chase.
    To you, my very own scar.
    Please, will you hear my case?

    Hello, my shiny little star.
    How do you do,
    Watching my every war?

    ~~~

    You are the only star,
    I dare call my sweet.

    Please, let's end this war
    I can't face this defeat.




    I was a little rushed and I think it needs some refining, but for a first attempt?
     
  2. Wasturr

    Wasturr OMG Member

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    Re: Another Sov failure! :P

    I dunno if your wooing someone or trying to make em' suicide but it's decent enough.
     
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