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Request a poem here!

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by master412160, Mar 5, 2010.

  1. master412160

    master412160 Catching The Hogwarts Express

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    I will do one poem at a time for you. And you can only request it once.


    Tell me in detail about what it must be or if you just want a poem of the creator choice.


    Also if it needs to be long or short and if its about a person give hair color, eye color, first name, character description, ...


    Thanks. I hope I can write some.
     
  2. Uchiha Madara

    Uchiha Madara 九尾の妖狐

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    Can you create a poem about me, the creator of this forum? You can make up the character in it, but it should be long.
     
  3. OP
    master412160

    master412160 Catching The Hogwarts Express

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    hmm this is a challenge and I will try to write one.


    Thanks


    Makaan the good guy


    Once upon a time there was a guy that didn't like to rhyme,


    he was legend of crime.


    Change came in his life,


    he had it hard to survive.


    But a hand reached out to help him get safe and sound,


    he was back with his feet on the ground.


    One day he went online and knew what he want.


    He started a forum called HPC,


    It made him very happy


    This forum of mine made my dream come true in time.


    And now I like to rhyme!


    The end is not in sight, a dream happened in real to help people,


    with HPC he made allot of people leave pleased and not teased!
     
  4. Trixie

    Trixie The One and Only

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    Am I allowed to criticise or is this a strictly "take what you get" thing?


    I understand if you don't want to hear it :p
     
  5. Uchiha Madara

    Uchiha Madara 九尾の妖狐

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    I think you'd be allowed to criticise it.


    I just realised this is not a fanart request, so I've moved this into the main creative discussion board.
     
  6. Trixie

    Trixie The One and Only

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    I'll wait for the OP to answer... Also,this puts this thread in my territory :3


    PS: I won't be online later today,Makaan :p
     
  7. OP
    master412160

    master412160 Catching The Hogwarts Express

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    Yeah sure you can tell me if it sucks or is good/bad
     
  8. Trixie

    Trixie The One and Only

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    I'm sorry if it was harsh,but I just wanted to point some things out. It'll help you for the next poem :rolleyes:


    1. What does "he was legend of crime" mean?


    2. he "found" it hard to survive.


    3. Whose hand? What hand?


    4. "knew what he wanted."


    5. Shouldn't it be the "forum of his"?


    6. What does that mean?


    7. Did you really mean to imply people left the forums?
     
  9. Diplomat

    Diplomat OMG Member

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    thats really good great job on it for real..
     
  10. OP
    master412160

    master412160 Catching The Hogwarts Express

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    Thats k man np. Just a hand, somone that helped me and guided him to make a forum I don't know. Its a poem where you don't have to think to deep or else the poem mean nothing to you.
     
  11. Trixie

    Trixie The One and Only

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    Oh well, I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems :D


    Don't stop writing them!
     
  12. OP
    master412160

    master412160 Catching The Hogwarts Express

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    I sure will not! I love it. where do I make a new poem ? In this topic ? Or in a new topic ?
     
  13. Trixie

    Trixie The One and Only

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    This topic will do.... Are you still taking requests?
     
  14. OP
    master412160

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    Hmm not now prehaps in the future.
     
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