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The Night Revisted

Discussion in 'Awesome Media' started by Pyro, Mar 12, 2005.

  1. Pyro

    Pyro OMG Member

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    The Night Revisted

    I wrote this one ;) It was actually for school, and we did have guidelines, but I sort of like it.


    Glancing up at the sky,

    All who was here was the night

    His icy black stare - darkness

    Night is what is

    When nothing else is

    He knew why I was there

    He knew what tales to tell

    So I listened.



    No matter how many stars

    or how black the night

    or a missing moon -

    they are still there

    But you must look

    His voice faded

    Into celestial nothing

    But I understood.
     
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    Madigan OMG Member

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    Nice poem Pyro.:)
     
  3. Davidk

    Davidk OMG Member

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    Not bad for a ice cream man. What did you get for a grade on it? ;)
     
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    Pyro

    Pyro OMG Member

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    A-, actually. I got a point taken off because of some spelling error something, and she didn't believe me when I told her that I meant to spell stare 'stair' :D
     
  5. Davidk

    Davidk OMG Member

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    ...... tell her to @#()*$)(@#$()@#)($*()@#*$()*#($)#)($*@)$*)@#($@#$@# ;)
     
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    Pyro

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    I don't think I'd still have an A- anymore if I did that. Plus I was trying to pass the class. It was harder than it looked like. We got an F on our Julius Caesar reinactment when we accidently stabbed our Julius Caesar a bit too low if you catch my drift, and he started saying his lines in an extremely high pitched voice :cool:
     
  7. Davidk

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    I am in psychoville and Midnight is the mayor ;)

    The title of this thread is spelled wrong. You need to give me mod privelages so I can fix your mistakes.
     
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