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Three Haikus

Discussion in 'Awesome Media' started by Frag, Jan 26, 2005.

  1. Frag

    Frag OMG Member

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    Three Haikus

    I don't claim for these to be any good. I'm more of a prose-ist than a poet.

    Maneki Neko
    The little black cat,
    plump with good fortune and luck,
    brings me happiness.

    Little Bell
    Little bell, hanging
    from my bedroom window, makes
    me smile with each ring.

    Streetlight
    Bright streetlight in the
    night shows a cigarette kiss
    an unshaven face.
     
  2. zero

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    there decent. Damn good actually, I dont really like hiakus, but these are good. Angelina likes them too. :)
     

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  3. Davidk

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    I like Angelina too :)
     
  4. Madigan

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    David,
    pick up that tongue of yours, you're gonna trip over it. hehehe ;)
     
  5. Davidk

    Davidk OMG Member

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    lol wow, I can't help it! :)
     
  6. Madigan

    Madigan OMG Member

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    I hear ya buddy, I hear ya.
     
  7. Davidk

    Davidk OMG Member

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    Are you male or female?
     
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    Madigan OMG Member

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    I'm a male

    Someone hasn't read the "Introductions" thread...lol
    just teasing you Dave.
    My real name is Paul and I live in Ontario, Canada
     
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    Pyro OMG Member

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    I like the haikus. They're sort of simple and to the point. ;) And cool sounding.
     
  10. Madigan

    Madigan OMG Member

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    I could never get into haikus. I'm not sure why.
    Nothing personal Frag. I'm sure as far as haikus go, yours are very well written.

    My impression of haikus are "short" perhaps, but to the point? It's more of a colourful way of making a point I think.

    The point of the above hailus:

    My cat makes me happy
    My bell makes me smile
    Someone's smoking by the streetlight

    I mean no insult to Frag or to his works. I guess we all have likes and dislikes in what we choose to read that's all. I am merely stating my personal opinion of haikus in general.
    I still want to thank Frag for sharing his work with us, and I sincerely hope you will share more with us.
     
  11. AainaA

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    I like streetlight the most. Its the least tedious, and ... paints better if you know what I mean
     
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